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paulypants
07-08-2010, 04:55 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-08-2010/122118_Hot_Pursuit.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: In Hot Pursuit, Starring Jesse Archer
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 30
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Heartthrob Jesse Archer is having a rough day. While jogging through the dark, spooky forest (possibly not his smartest choice), he realizes that he isn’t alone. And his pursuant, a shadowy, knock-kneed monster with an appetite for cute hunks, seems to be picking up speed! It doesn’t help that suddenly the branches in Jesse’s path act like menacing claws, tearing his skimpy outfit to shreds and blocking his path to freedom. Like the countless female victims of slasher flicks that came before him, our hero’s fate is sealed. But that won’t stop him from putting up a good fight — and of course losing his clothes in the process!

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
All feedback welcome

totsy
07-08-2010, 05:32 PM
This is a hoot, Paulypants!! I think Jesse is running faster than he has to for that monster looks pretty slow to me. Could have saved his clothes.

Other than that, this is great. I like it. Don't know much about human form so I leave the critiquing up to the experts.

La_
07-10-2010, 03:33 PM
haha, cool stuff, very book cover/movie poster, fabulously painted ... is it suppose to be 'spoofy' cause mr. heart throb looks mock scared, laughing

la

ahughes798
07-11-2010, 06:12 PM
I love this! It's really well done....and so silly, in a very excellent way. I agree that Jesse could have slowed down and saved his clothes..knock kneed monster doesn't look like he can move so fast. Reminds me of the really cool cover art on pulp fiction novels from the 1950's.

where were the Jesse Archers when I was his age? Just askin'. April

bocote
07-12-2010, 11:08 AM
A beautiful story. If I must be critical I think I'd like to see our characters head and right hand on the canvas.

The lighting and technique is great.

Have fun,