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picasso655
07-06-2010, 08:26 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-06-2010/223403_jeff_001.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: abstraction
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 12x16
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
study with colors

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
anything will help

Corby
07-06-2010, 09:06 PM
Its sort of like a Mondrian on a diet. pale and weak. probably the result of too much white and colors too paled down with white. It has need of greater contrasts to give it some Oompfh (sorry for the technical term) and bring it alive. Running a color scale will take the colors right down to black as well as to white on the opposite end. Perhaps though I am requiring too much from a color study. They are informative and they are fun to do!

Gwenlyn Norton
07-07-2010, 01:02 PM
Also, I like more curves.