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valentine girl
06-29-2010, 12:23 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/06-29-2010/143385_DSC00913.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/06-29-2010/143385_DSC01703.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: daydreaming
Year Created:
Medium: Pencil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 14x18
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
gra[hite of my grandaughter!

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
any comments are anticipated!

Corby
06-29-2010, 01:45 PM
This is beautifully done! The only crit I would have is that the value of the tieback on the curtain is too heavy and dark. Cut it way back to match the curtain. Dark as it is it seems attached to her head. A small thing but it looms large because of the over all quality work you have here. Perhaps another small matter would be the lines in the curtain fabric that follow the same contours as her hair...

crazywoman53
06-30-2010, 04:38 PM
Very Sweet little girl and nice drawing. I would suggest you lighten the value of the neck. It appears she has on a dark turtle neck rather than that being part of her.

valentine girl
06-30-2010, 09:29 PM
thanks for the help guys. corby the tie back is a metal bracket. maybe some high lights would help. crazywoman, she does have another shirt underneath, but i think you are right about making it a little lighter.thanks********sandy