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bobreeves
09-27-2002, 05:53 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-27-2002/12948_paintings_to_WC_003.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Untitled
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Oil
Surface: Board
Dimension: 8x10
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Done from photo, please comment on any and all portions of this work.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Am I to detailed, or not loose enough with my brushwork.

jerryW
09-28-2002, 08:47 AM
verysubstantial work
the sky has an intensity that is matched in all other color complexes in some way
it hangs together well.

glowbug
09-28-2002, 07:15 PM
Nice colors. I'd really like to see the photo reference if you can post it. I feel that you can do something more to lead the eye into the picture and control what the viewer sees. You have a nice way of putting on paint.
I think the trees are too similar and make a duo and that you might make one a bit different than the other.
Also dark under the foreground reeds would make them pop out more.