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valentine girl
06-23-2010, 07:29 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/23-Jun-2010/143385-DSC01702.jpg MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/06-23-2010/143385_100_0355.jpg


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/06-23-2010/143385_DSC01702.jpg



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: tiny reader
Year Created:
Medium: Pencil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 8x10
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
graphite of young girl intensely reading

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
any comments are welcome and anticipated

kuphoff
06-23-2010, 07:42 PM
This is a cute drawing. I am no art expert, but the left leg of the little girl is bothersome. It looks twisted or deformed. Might want to check the shading there. Otherwise very nice in my opinion.

La_
06-24-2010, 01:15 PM
awww, flashes me back to my girlies, thanks for that = )

admirable job, pencil is so hard for me so yay you!

i agree the leg shadows got a little darker than they need to be and something you might want to consider for the next one is to really concentrate on the details around the focal area, in this case the face and book section, and let the rest be a bit softer in general (feet, chair, blanket). this would really pull the viewer into the childs concentration/activity and imho adds painterly ambiance to a drawing.

la