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Tilen
06-18-2010, 11:33 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/06-18-2010/225422_Lake_Dove_Hut_Tasmania-600px.jpg



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Tilen's-1 day 1 painting: day 13 > Lake Dove Hut
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Board
Dimension: 6
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
daily 6" x 6" oil painting

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any constructive feedback are welcome!


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Tilen ~ artplanet (http://www.flickr.com/photos/tilenti/)

deb789
06-19-2010, 12:43 AM
The paint texture, lively brushwork and bright color palette is really nice. This could be a great illustration for a children's book. It looks like a very happy place!

Corby
06-19-2010, 10:33 AM
The painting would perhaps be more effective if you pulled the colors you have more into the left hand side and the foreground of the painting. Gives it greater interest, depth and balance.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/19-Jun-2010/70790-tasmania.jpg