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arleneart1
06-17-2010, 12:53 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/06-17-2010/227415_IMG_0695.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Reflection, Lake District, England
Year Created:
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 18 x 24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
The is watercolor on canvas. I have been very intested in working with canvas and would like comments. Thank you.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Please comment on following:<br>1. reflective quality<br>2. compostition<br>

crazywoman53
06-17-2010, 01:13 PM
I think this is a charming watercolor. The thing I would like to see more of is a stronger direction of light, especially on the houses which is I assume to be your center of interest. Your refection is nice and I see that you have some horizontal lines going through to help is set down. I am wondering though if there were some jiggling of the image if it might read "more reflective"? Your sky is quite pretty.

RichD
06-17-2010, 01:57 PM
I think this is very well done and ^^some good advice above. My only observation is that the horizon seems to go right through the middle of the composition which is a bit distracting

tgsloth
06-17-2010, 04:38 PM
The reflection of the sky in the water is darker, as it should be, but the color intensity is too blue, too high chroma.