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Tilen
06-09-2010, 05:15 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/06-09-2010/225422_dance-600px.jpg



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Tilen's -- 1 day 1 painting: day 9 > dance
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Board
Dimension: 6
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Tilen's -- 1 day 1 painting: day 9 > dance

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any constructive feedback are welcome!





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Tilen ~ artplanet (http://www.flickr.com/photos/tilenti/)

tgsloth
06-09-2010, 09:02 AM
Just a wonderful composition within the square canvas. Great technique with the square paint dabs. My one suggestion is that the dark line across the horizon, perhaps depicting a line of trees, is too dark. Dark comes forward. Lighter values in this element of the painting will produce a greater sense of depth.

Corby
06-09-2010, 10:12 AM
wow!!! Looks like you used a 'flat' what size was it ? Hog hair Bristle?
no crits from me, I have been instructed as well as entertained by this.

Tilen
06-10-2010, 04:23 AM
tx tgsloth! you're quite right, will keep that in mind

tx Corby! yes, flat #2