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ralphie128
06-04-2010, 05:18 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/06-04-2010/43280_IMG_2106_Moonlit_Night_22222.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Moonlit Night 2
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 18x24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Photo Reference,Teddi WetCanvas.com<br><br>Yes Christine you are right of course. Lousy photo with brown light reflections.<br>Here is a better one. Thanks.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
All C/C welcome. Thank you!

crazywoman53
06-04-2010, 06:38 PM
Ah. yesssss now you're talking.. now it looks like a moonlit night.

Corby
06-04-2010, 09:19 PM
Yes, brown just doesn't do it unless you embrace the sky with the same tones. Blue seems to carry the needed essence. It works nicely now!

ralphie128
06-05-2010, 11:40 AM
Thanks for the comments, it's a great place here for feedback and exchange of ideas. The painting has more work needed for sure, like making the moon smaller to push it back and more work on the color. I am experimenting and winging it a lot lately. A great way to improve but the painting doesn't aways come out the way we want it and can be costly in paint. Thanks again and have a good day!

kathrynlovespets
06-05-2010, 02:03 PM
I love the color..
the edges look too sharp at the top..I would round them out...
I mean the squareness of the frame at the top is all.

T.Wayne
06-05-2010, 03:13 PM
Great as usual.

cotswoldlady
06-06-2010, 01:46 PM
much better with the blue.

ralphie128
06-07-2010, 11:07 AM
Thank you all for the comments and feedback! Have a great day and happy painting!