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Purcell
05-30-2010, 02:43 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/05-30-2010/214791_dali_bee_large-web.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/05-30-2010/214791_dali2_small.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Detail from Dali's 'Dream Caused by ............'
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 20x8
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Detail painted as a 'grisaille' from Dali's 'Dream Caused by the Flight of a Bee around a Pomegranate a Second Before Awakening'.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I'd appreciate criticism on anything but particularly conce<br>ing the light and the form of the torso around the ribs.

La_
05-31-2010, 11:40 AM
nicely done ... i think her butt cheek should be thicker, more pronounced as without it the thigh looks too large ... a hint of shadows to represent rib bones might be a nice addition.

no tigers? ; )

la

Purcell
06-01-2010, 06:00 PM
No tigers La but I'm working on an elephant! Everything that you said is correct, thanks - mental note to myself, pay more attention to detail :( I lost sight of the line on her thigh and now Gala looks like an Olympic weight lifter!