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benetom
05-24-2010, 05:50 AM
I decided to do two quick sketches and then try to bring them to life in watercolors. Any suggestions what should I change, add,....?
Should I use a pencil or pen ink, etc...
Those are gonna be minimalistic and I hope they will work out nice. The size of sketches is 10 x 10 cm.

So here they are...

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/24-May-2010/221026-sketch_1.jpg

Tunek
05-24-2010, 06:27 AM
I like them both! I would move the first one to the left and do a landscape painting for instance...great drawings

Yorky
05-24-2010, 08:31 AM
I like the grouping in the second.

Doug

Laura D
05-24-2010, 01:28 PM
My vote is for both but I really like the composition and values on the second one.

Etosha
05-25-2010, 01:48 AM
I'm with Doug and Laura, both are great, but the second has more appeal to me.

benetom
05-25-2010, 06:04 AM
Second it is then :D

jomaca
06-06-2010, 12:20 PM
I vote for the second, good drawing and composition.
Cordial greetings

noge
06-06-2010, 02:31 PM
:wave: the second :thumbsup: - why -its a case of composition
(IMHO)
1.)some similar building make a nice repitation ( works well )
2.) the fire-wood is a nice frame for the buildings (& maybe good contrast )
3.) The fence on the right and a way on the left are both leading to the buildings & this makes perspective too