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artinoils
09-24-2002, 09:24 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-24-2002/7970_flowerbasket.jpg


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-24-2002/7970_flowerbasketcrp.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Untitled
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Board
Dimension: 14 x11
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Did this to see what I liked about the scene, from photo. Want to do this in oil but I think the cropped version.
The perspective is off on the lower edge of shop entry and maybe more.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Which do you prefer cropped or not.
Critique please.

artbabe21
09-24-2002, 10:36 PM
yes, definitely the cropped version.....
it's wonderful.....the colors delightful...:)

jerryW
09-25-2002, 08:44 AM
great colored shapes painted from the inside out,
some colors may be too pure (blue sweater) .
the rest
like bonnard
great connections with edge.

artinoils
09-27-2002, 02:16 AM
This was supposed to have a title....tried to edit but still came up untitled.
Artbabe, glad you liked the crop, too! Definitely has more focus and eliminated the fillers of space.
Jerry, I'll take that as a compliment, thank you. I love cobalt blue. Ok so maybe I went a little overboard with it on the sweater but the white haired lady is the star.

Southern Style
09-27-2002, 04:35 AM
Delightful scene and colors. I also like the cropped version. I don't know if it's just me or not..but the womens' legs look too short and small. Maybe it's the scan?