The Trinity

[Wolverine]

MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-23-2002/11966_TheTrinity.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: The Trinity
Year Created: 1996
Medium: Pen/Ink
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 8 1/2 x 11
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Thanks for your responses you guys:) This is my second original design. I wanted this one to have a lot of color being opposite from the black & white. I wanted the color to blend together using the right colors. I wanted the scale of the image to be greater, also.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Is this an improvement to *The Love of Jesus* or a compliment to it. My intention was for it to be a compliment to it. Also, how is the color combination? Thanks:)

[ellenf]

Wolverine, I think this is an appropriate sequel to "The Love Of Jesus." And I'm glad to see you are exploring color.

The symbolism here is stronger than in the earlier piece. That is good.

I find the colors of the crossses are dulled - neutralized - compared to the other colors you've used. I might think the crosses would be more vibrant. To stand out. To glow.

Seems you want special attention directed to the yellow diamond above the heart. Maybe make it even more important by letting it shimmer?

I don't understand the shape in the lower left corner.

Would love to see what you've done in the last few months.