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benetom
04-19-2010, 03:17 AM
So Im a beginner at Oil pastels :) I did 2 paintings I want to show you, so please give me some observations on them. Thanks in advance, Tom...

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/19-Apr-2010/221026-06042010306.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/19-Apr-2010/221026-06042010305.jpg

hollyga
04-19-2010, 07:03 AM
Tom - Welcome to our little corner of the world and what a great start with OPs! Love the bold colors and the use of sgraffito in both. Can't wait to see more of your efforts. These are really good.

Holly :wave:

ColorMyWorld
04-19-2010, 07:48 AM
These are nice. Great use of color. I particularly like the way you did the mountains in the second one.

Pat Isaac
04-19-2010, 08:09 AM
Welcome to the OP forum, Tom. Nice start with the OPs and I like your use of color. The paintings also have a nice painterly feel.

Pat

Esmeralinda
04-19-2010, 09:03 AM
Hello and welcome :wave:

You seem to be having fun with these new op's ! I especially like the second for the calmness but the first has lots of great energy !

Are these from your own photos ?

benetom
04-19-2010, 10:55 AM
Thanks on positive words ( although critics are welcomed as well :) ) ...
I didnt have any reference photos or such. They came from my mind as I did them .

Next time I need a better camera. Shots were taken from mobile phone :o and colors arent what they are look like in real.
Im totaly new to paintings, but my mother hooked me up with it. She is a painter for some 10 years or so and she seems to pass the enthusiasm on me as well :D And I love it .

ANd there is another one in OP I did recently but forgot to upload.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/19-Apr-2010/221026-19042010347.jpg

Sry on my poor English.

Greetings from SLovenia !
Tom

Alan P. in OC
04-19-2010, 04:04 PM
Good job on your first couple of paintings. I like the mountain one the best, the sky is blended nicely (did you do a wash with turp?) but the line of grayish trees below it is a little too even. The colors in the other two are great; I do think the last one's clouds look a little too geometrically even (I see a rectangle and a triangle) and too textured/dark for my tastes. Keep working and developing your style like I try to do, your work looks promising.

benetom
04-19-2010, 04:08 PM
Ty :D
I see my mistakes as well....I was more concentrating on how OP works...blending, mixing colors,....n stuff...will try to improve for sure...and it was done in 15 min or so...too fast :D

sunychka
04-20-2010, 04:28 AM
Hi from another beginner to OPs! :wave:
Nice works! I like second most.