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OffBeat
09-21-2002, 11:45 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-21-2002/10513_ian_s_colorful_face.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Colorful Brother
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Oil Pastel
Surface: Other
Dimension: 16x20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I'm an art student and 14 would like feedback.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I think I'm finished?

gayelyn
09-22-2002, 12:53 AM
:clap: I love the colour composition.The only worry for me is the right eye.Position looks like it should be slightly moved to the right maybe a highlight. Just my feeling.Wonderful confidence keep painting.

giniaad
09-22-2002, 01:06 AM
keep playing with that color...

some suggestions...mostly for the next piece you do...
inside mouth usually darker
colorful brother's left eye looks larger
(perhaps bring upper lid down...)
bring tip of nose out with highlight(s)
a background would be appreciated by many
(don't leave any paper undone)

good basic form
very expressive

Paintonbrush
09-22-2002, 07:05 PM
Great little brother colors and shape. I have never used oil pastels, so I admire your work. Please do more and post.

jerryW
09-22-2002, 07:13 PM
oil pastel can cover oil pastel.
after you cover the whole page you can begin to connect up your initial ideas and play with shapes better.
this is a good start but everything is still very thin,

kelleybee
09-22-2002, 11:50 PM
When you take a painting break. take your canvas and place it upside down in front of a mirror. Stand back....you will see a lot...good job