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pampe
09-20-2002, 10:12 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-20-2002/4054_boo4.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Becca as a Woman
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Watercolor Paper
Dimension: 9 x 12
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
My daughter as model....

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
The texture is new for me...does it work?

jerryW
09-21-2002, 12:17 AM
covered in colored kisses

deserving.

will flamenco begin?

giniaad
09-21-2002, 05:33 AM
beautiful...
works for me!

painterbear
09-21-2002, 06:44 AM
Pampe:

One word —YES!

The texturing adds excitement. I really like it. Great idea to give it a try with a portrait of a beautiful young woman who seems to be thinking about what is coming up in her life. Like the way her eyes are looking off to the side.

Terrific painting.

:p

Sylvia

steveb
09-21-2002, 01:23 PM
This is lovely

I like the textures, it's like she is ion the midst of fairies or prayers. I think the black texture at the bottom is my favorite.
You have lit her face ell.

thank you for sharing
steveb

artbabe21
09-21-2002, 03:15 PM
Now you're REALLY on to something innovative...
keep going, I LOVE this!
who IS Becca?

pampe
09-21-2002, 04:11 PM
((jerry ))

steve...I like both ideas...fairies and prayers...thanks!!

Thank you , sylvia! and gini

BozemanBABE..that's my baby girl
glad you like it...I'm dying to do more of these....

artbabe21
09-21-2002, 04:28 PM
Becca is a beauty, like her mom! :)

pampe
09-21-2002, 07:11 PM
aw...shucks


*kicking rox*


thanks

Paintonbrush
09-22-2002, 02:23 PM
Fascinating! The ideas and creativity pump through moms like no other.

TKeela
09-22-2002, 02:39 PM
Normally I would just rave over this, but since this is the critique forum, I'll just say that it's lovely, the colors are really appealing to me.

Now, critique:

The darker black/grey in the lower left is almost muddy, and seems at odds with the rest of this colorful work.

The texture in that corner also seems different and is somewhat jarring. Otherwise, I think the effect worked very well!

pampe
09-22-2002, 10:46 PM
Painton...well maybe


Tkeela, thanks for the input....it looks more congruent in real life actually....