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ordie4
09-20-2002, 11:10 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-20-2002/7974_art_by97.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: still energy
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 11x15
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
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MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
not sure i'm happy with this one. this page has about 5 layers of paint with all of the adjustments i made....any changes you can think of?

madster
09-20-2002, 12:28 PM
It's topo monochomatic.

Try adding just a few strokes of a really really dark red or brown for contrast here and there to define the major shapes.

The best solution for "blah" works is to "Punch them up!"
Get Bold!
Throw some dramatic contrast in for the eye to appreciate!

Madster

ordie4
09-25-2002, 01:42 AM
thanks madster, good points. here is another go.

layers 6, 7, 8, etc.......:D also, a bit better picture. the other had a yellow tone adding to the monochromatic mess

i am liking this much better now

jerryW
09-25-2002, 08:24 AM
you do something special at a very basic level which is unique and exciting