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meiwun
09-18-2002, 12:12 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-18-2002/9862_2fish.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: 2 fish
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Board
Dimension: 14x18
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
i drew this from a photo, but the background and colour was changed quite different. Now the air is exactly what i want..

the photo has 3 fish,
but my painting just needs 2


MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
any advice, comment and suggestions are welcome.

jerryW
09-18-2002, 12:17 PM
I had decided to become a lurker- commenting can be work

and bam you do this to me!

but this is so excellent in every way. (how can I be silent!)

the distribution of strong color suggests
and complements form expertly!
and of course
the form is delicious.

Wayne Gaudon
09-18-2002, 02:01 PM
accomplished .. :D Great work.

giniaad
09-18-2002, 02:24 PM
thank you for this visual gift!

love it in every way

Paintonbrush
09-18-2002, 07:50 PM
Fabulous. thanks for sharing your talent. only two fish yes, and please tell Jerry he cannot lurk.

Wayne Gaudon
09-18-2002, 09:42 PM
I'd bet he couldn't if he tried .. art is an addiction.

arourapope
09-18-2002, 10:03 PM
Absolutely great piece (and I'm about to run over to the violin and say the same thing)
Keep these guys away from Wayne's fisherman, though. :D

dean_harryman
09-18-2002, 10:06 PM
this painting has everything it needs it could be a gallery pice, It is great!:clap:

meiwun
09-18-2002, 10:49 PM
oh jerry, u cant lurk, stay and addict here all together! i really like here :p

also thanks fishman Wayne, Giniaad, Paintonbrush, Aurorapope and Dean Harryman!

the painting is actually a gift, i gave it to my friend last nite.

mame
09-18-2002, 11:23 PM
Very nice color.

Maybe if you paint fish again, go to the fish market and buy real fish. Pay particular attention to the eyes with your next fish painting. Even the eyes of a dead fish have something to say.

meiwun
09-19-2002, 01:18 AM
i will try to taste what u told.
here supermarket is not far away from my house :)

mame, one of my friends just told me the colour is kind of dirt in the background dark area of the fish.
do u think so, may i ask your opinion?

mame
09-19-2002, 02:01 AM
Color is a very personal thing. I like all the colors I use to be mixed and I especially like mixed complimentaries. Some people call this mud - but mud can be very complex and interesting because then if you add just small areas of brighter/higher value or pure color, it sends a message of "this is a special or important area".

Much like the way you did your violin painting.

I like the look of what your friend calls "dirt" in the fish painting. I see alot of variation in the color mixing. I think it looks very sophisticated.

meiwun
09-19-2002, 08:48 AM
as the friend is good at drawing, so i began to doubt myself.
still searching and learning, always in self-doubt.

suddenly remind a sentence
"remember to trust your own eyes and hands the most."

Antonella
09-30-2002, 08:22 AM
I liked all your paintings but this is the one I prefer so i decided to post here. You have a great talent and I love your choice of colours, keep up the good work!

artbabe21
09-30-2002, 11:18 AM
beautiful job here, colors well handled!
like to see more! :)