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JudySmith
09-17-2002, 04:14 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-17-2002/12825_New_Cape_Henry_Light.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: New Cape Henry Light
Year Created: 2001
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16x20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
2nd of lighthouse series.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Over all perspective okay?

madster
09-18-2002, 03:43 PM
The perspective is very good, but your whites are too white on the lighthouse. With the sharp contrast of the black, the eye is forced to go up and down, and is prevented from seeing the rest of the picture, even though the white house in the distance attempts to draw the eye over.

Try toning down the brightness a little with a very pale gold to offset all of the blue of the sky.

Overall, though a very nice piece.

Madster