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lizik
09-16-2002, 10:17 PM
A painting of a full moon in Alaska. Your critique is welcome!

mariela
09-16-2002, 10:57 PM
Hi Lisi! it's abit dificult for me to critique your painting, 'cause i can't feel it. You see, full moon around hear is a tottaly different experiance! But, i do like the composition - colorful wishes

Rod
09-17-2002, 03:02 AM
Welcome lizik,

Neat painting, like your composition with the moon emerging from behind the mountain peak. You have a good range of tones in the foregropund and mountain.

I feel the moon would have shown brighter if left white against a blue grey sky,

Rod

tigre255
09-17-2002, 06:37 AM
Nice work, but I have to agree with Rod.

But I really like what you did and looking forward to seeing more of your work.

artesana
09-17-2002, 04:35 PM
Hi Lizik:

I have never been in Alaska so I wouldn't know if the moon would look just like your painting, but I like this composition very much. I agree that making the moon lighter would have really made it look great. Your choice of colors for the rest of the painting are quite appropriate for a moon lit scene. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Isie

Gia
09-17-2002, 06:04 PM
Originally posted by Rod
Welcome lizik,


I feel the moon would have shown brighter if left white against a blue grey sky,

Rod

agree....

lizik
09-17-2002, 10:38 PM
thank you all for your comments and suggestions.