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Gregg Van Sickle
01-25-2010, 09:41 PM
My daughter on Tybee Island. 18 x 24

01-26-2010, 02:11 AM
Hi Gregg, nice sky colors, I can't help but think with the farthest white cresting wave it kinda looks like a titlewave being so high above here head!
I'm wondering if you painted out that wave and straightened the horizon it would look a bit better.
water is darkest farther away and gets lighter as it comes closer, gives a sense of distance.
Shgame her features are so dark, kinda hard to make out.
Sorry, didn't mean to be so negative, hope it helps, just my thoughts!

01-26-2010, 03:54 AM
Gotta agree with Kathie's assessment here Gregg.Lower the sky and lighten the colors there for a feeling of distance. You might want to have a look at your values on the figure of your daughter as well.