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madmum
09-13-2002, 06:58 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-13-2002/10535_Keep_off_the_Grass_revised.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-13-2002/10535_Keep_off_the_Grass_revised_detail.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-13-2002/10535_keep_of_the_grass_photo.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Keep off the Grass
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Watercolor Paper
Dimension: 7 x 7
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Already posted in watercolour forum and portrait forum - is this illegal? lol

Painting from a photo of me when I was about 3. First portrait. Posting whole painting, close up of detail and reference photo.

Ruth

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
What do I need to think about next time I do a portrait?

Wayne Gaudon
09-13-2002, 08:55 AM
This is nice .. for me, I think your values are too high key but that is only personal opinion.

jerryW
09-13-2002, 09:08 AM
very exciting work!
an immediate wow.
the area to the left of the girl in the photo has a lovely dark shape
which no longer fits in the composition but maybe the dark color will work still.
writing on the sign may be too legible.