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Title: The Pair
Year Created: 2002
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!
Hi All.....this is painted on Arches CP with WN paints....
Comments, suggestions, critiques all requested...
MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I guess the question for the Panel is, does it work and if not why not......?
What would you do to make it better?
09-12-2002, 06:44 PM
a carnival of well organized color is dancing while
the scene crystallizes in a moment and new features continue to appear - nice strong evidence of some of the artist's process decorates the finished work.
09-12-2002, 09:25 PM
I think it is swell!
cropped versions would work also
only one small question...
of the front duck
is the lower part of the bill that large?
perhaps I am being ignorant...
very colorful, alive and welcoming to view
09-12-2002, 10:15 PM
This is great Al! I love the deep colors.
09-13-2002, 01:16 AM
I really like the subject matter. Your color choices are great along with your technique. The only thing is I think the closest goose’s bill is a tad disproportioned to large.
09-13-2002, 09:38 AM
well done water. love the wake the ducks leave, nice detail
thanks all......appreciate you stopping by and leaving a comment........
09-13-2002, 01:41 PM
I'm no painter, but just wanted to let you know your water here really comes alive and has a lot of movement. Nice depth.
I too am noticing the difference in bills on the birds. Having grown up raising both ducks and geese on a farm the one on our left looks like a goose, the other a white duck.
Otherwise its a piece I would hang on my wall.
Have a great day! :)
09-14-2002, 12:26 AM
I really like this! Beautiful shimmery water & reflections.......love your use of COLOR!
only nit pick the duck's bill as mentioned...
09-14-2002, 12:31 AM
Love the colors, the reflections, and the "flow," all wonderful.
And echo the "bill" objection-the front one does look more like a goose and the back a duck.
Put a stake in this vampire, and try to get the bills organized on your next project.
FishBellyWhite AKA Jake
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