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YLCIA
12-05-2009, 12:25 PM
I wish the photo would be better:( If weather improve I will take another shot outside.http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/05-Dec-2009/2940-DSCN0347.JPG
The pears are much better in the real:rolleyes:

Julia

MrsG_SoCal
12-05-2009, 02:09 PM
Glass is terrific and lovely background!

aspenman
12-05-2009, 02:12 PM
Very nice - good color. Overall I like the compostion but I think I would have laid the front pear cross wise with the stem pointing to the left (into the painting) The bottom side of the pear is somewhat confusing as to what type of fruit it is (ie: no real visual definition.) Luv the BG as well.

YLCIA
12-05-2009, 06:13 PM
I forgot to mention : this painting is 9" by 11"
I try again :) this is just pear part .http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/05-Dec-2009/2940-DSCN0351.JPG

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/05-Dec-2009/2940-DSCN0352.JPG

Oh, well... just not working. Maybe I have problem with the camera... need to check...

Julia

noodle1
12-05-2009, 07:13 PM
I think you did a great job with this, but I need to ask a question, wouldn't the wine bottle itself cast more of it's color on the contents, just to me it's seems a bit disconnected, or lighten the top half so the glass of the bottle looks continuous. Just my thought tho, I do like it very much.

Elaine

YLCIA
12-05-2009, 07:47 PM
Thank You Elaine for looking . I think you are right. I will give the reflected colors to the wine :)

YLCIA
12-05-2009, 07:51 PM
Richard, thank you. I think I will place the pears differently in the next painting as it gave me some grief trying to differentiate them.

Julia

OkeeKat
12-05-2009, 09:00 PM
Hi Julia, great work!
love the glass work too.. unfortunately I think the base of the glass, shape is a little off.. wouldnt it be similar to the opening of the top of the glass?? same spherical shape, oval?? not sure.. but does look a little off there, sorry.

YLCIA
12-05-2009, 11:10 PM
Kathie thank you for looking and comments :) The base does not repeat the shape of the glass opening but the liquid in the glass does... Maybe I made it too round though...


Julia:wave:

Margaret 59
12-06-2009, 01:56 AM
Lovely painting, Julia!!

arl
12-06-2009, 05:52 AM
I really like the set up and modeling of the objects.

LavenderFrost
12-06-2009, 07:36 PM
Very nice!