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Gollator
09-09-2002, 06:02 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/09-09-2002/3379_sailor.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Hurray, we're flying
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 60x80
Allow digital alterations?: No, please :)

MY COMMENTS:
A "quicky" because I needed a break from the more detailed ones I am working on.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
every comment/critique/thought appreciated

madster
09-09-2002, 06:05 PM
Not bad, composition is good, but it's too rough to really say more.

Gollator
09-09-2002, 06:12 PM
is "not saying more" a positive or a negative thing i wonder?

Anyway, it is certainly not intended to transmit a higher message, just trying to transport a feeling ;)

thanks for looking
G

arourapope
09-09-2002, 06:15 PM
It made my heart leap! :D

Gollator
09-09-2002, 06:16 PM
Success! ;)

Ginette
09-09-2002, 06:32 PM
It gives a beautiful feeling of flying and being free.
So I say it's a success!

Ginette

madmum
09-09-2002, 06:44 PM
I really like the feeling from this :)

Just one thing, I don't understand why the seagull is casting a shadow on the sky????

Ruth

Ceu
09-09-2002, 08:47 PM
now this one is flying high and hopefuly it won't crash against the background. I like it because you have two different images going on here and it's great how the seagull is flying so close to the other painting to cast a shadow.:)

jerryW
09-09-2002, 10:24 PM
this is a boomerang bird with a dependable rigidity.
you may need to throw a few more quick ones to actually loosten up.

missed you.
last seen on a boat.

Paintonbrush
09-10-2002, 06:51 PM
spontaneous,
as much a surprise to the spontaneous one as turned out for the bird. You let him free and happy as a bird can be.

giniaad
09-10-2002, 07:57 PM
hey there flea!!!...
from looking at this
I think I can safely call you that...
(the bird casts a shadow though)

the sky is wonderful!
could do with out the lines around the bird...
but the overall feeling is very very good
more quickies!!!

is this happiness with after thoughts?

we have missed you...
pax!

Gollator
09-12-2002, 02:53 AM
G*: thx ;)

madmum: Accident at first, but I thought it was an interesting result to give the pic more depth, the bird coming out of the sky by casting a shadow on it.

Ceu: nah, I am a bit of the "dark and sad" fraction, but I think this time the bird won't crash ;)

jerry: I will surely try some other quick birds soon, these are real fun. Maybe I manage to make them more loose. *hug*

paint: thank you

geenee: Hey there ;) 'been a while. Flea?! Hee hee, actually, my sign language name is "Flea", how'd you know?

happiness? Uh oh! What an insult for a sinister person like me. It seems like I am loosing my principles. *grin*

re pax!

Again, thanks all so much for thoughts

Alyona
09-12-2002, 02:12 PM
Freedom of flight! :clap: It must be a great feeling! :clap:
(Although I hate height personally:o . It causes me dizziness and I want fall down:mad: .)
Love it! More please!:clap:

Evesangel
09-12-2002, 05:07 PM
Feels like Breaking free ... the shadow makes it appear that the bird even breaks free from the canvas... I like it.