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LJStudley
10-23-2009, 08:14 PM
Shelide's Gift. The poem below it explains it. Faber Castell Pitt Artist Pens on 110 lb. paper. 8.5x11 inches.
I used to use pencils but all I saw were mistakes. When I use pen all I see are opportunities.

Linda
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Shelide’s Gift

Long ago when time still slept
And night was dark, too dark to breathe
Nameless terrors slunk and crept
And noxious vapours seethed

Man stayed home to tend the fire
And wholesome creatures shunned the night
Shelide shook her wings and vowed
She would not rest till there was light

Light enough to banish fear
And bathe the night in joy and wonder
Light to dazzle eyes and hearts
To tear night’s veil asunder

“How shall I do?” She asked her kin
“With gossamer trails” they cried
“How shall I do?” She asked the sea
“With waves of shimmering light.”

“How shall I do?” She asked the sun
“Like me, but not the same.”
“How shall I do?” She asked of man
“Like sparks that leap from flame.”

Shelide spread her wings and flew
She flew into the dark
Weaving light from drops of hope
And the pulsing of her heart

A thousand years and a thousand more
She spilled the milky way
She wove the glittering curtains
The Northern Lights let play

A thousand years and a thousand more
And she forged the silvery moon
And sparked the stars from the flinty hearts
Of the creatures of the gloom.

And when the night was set ablaze
And darkness set to rout
Shelide fell to earth again
To watch the stars come out

She rested in the coolness
By a misty, moisty pond
Looked back across her shoulders
And saw her wings were gone

“You took so long” the creatures cried
“You tool so long” said man
“You must be the slowest thing
Since e’re the world began!”

And Shelide cried and crept away
Tears sparkling on the leaves
Remembering her lovely wings
She bows her head and grieves.

L.Studley

elsietreenut
10-23-2009, 09:02 PM
Awsome poem!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!

lovely drawing too. I like how you have different patterns in the different spaces.

elsietreenut
10-23-2009, 09:24 PM
Also love your attitude to pen work - "all I see are opportunities".

Zenica
10-23-2009, 10:35 PM
Wonderful, your words and your rhythm are astounding. Your pen flows like a river to combine with the words into a beautiful song. The story you pose reminds me of the great philosopher socrates' speech on the fall of a soul.

He said that a man was once an angel, immortal, with the greatest of wings but slowly over time the arrows of sin shot him down and made him mortal. Lovely work.

Z

Continental
11-06-2009, 02:00 PM
Wonderful poem and ink work!