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lindannemull
08-13-2009, 04:39 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-13-2009/194394_colin_meloy.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Colin Melot
Year Created:
Medium: Pencil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 8 1/2 X 5 1/2
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I was trying to experiment with a hatching style...

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
suggestions?

lindannemull
08-13-2009, 04:41 PM
Lol, its supposed to be Colin Meloy not Colin Melot, it wouldn't let me edit it for some reason. hahaha

DanaLJensen
08-13-2009, 06:07 PM
Very nice lindannemull. Would look great as a painting!! My only crit would be 'his' right hand (on our left), looks a little awkward and knuckles out of alignment. Other than that, love the cross hatching!! Well done.

Miranda_Asch
08-13-2009, 07:11 PM
I like the cross hatching technique! It gives the portrait some emotion and energy. I have to agree about the one hand, it does feel awkward. That's a tricky angle, though. Nice work!

yarddog
08-15-2009, 12:56 PM
nice job.....good treatment of the rather ambiguous onstage lighting.....yd