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SandF
07-23-2009, 09:22 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-23-2009/140061_Good_Mo<br>ing.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Good Mo<br>ing
Year Created:
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 15 x 12
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Playing in the paint again. I am not quite finished with this yet, so I am asking for some insight.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any ideas what to do next, more dark in the lower background... or what?

laudesan
07-23-2009, 09:29 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-23-2009/140061_Good_Morning.jpg

Very beautiful.. I really, really like your background..

SandF
07-23-2009, 09:30 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-23-2009/140061_Good_Mo<br>ing.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Good Mo<br>ing
Year Created:
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 15 x 12
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Playing in the paint again. I am not quite finished with this yet, so I am asking for some insight.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any ideas what to do next, more dark in the lower background... or what?

SandF
07-23-2009, 09:38 PM
Something didn't go right, I will try again later.

Corby
07-24-2009, 01:00 AM
an extremely beautiful arrangement...it seems to speak 'finished' to me. I know that things can be overdone and with watercolor there is not so good a chance of removing what isn't wanted...

aludal
07-24-2009, 01:38 AM
nice aquarelle, but to me too many flowers are "shadowed' in such a manner that they look pasted on top of the paper.

Ronni
07-24-2009, 03:59 AM
It looks perfect to me.

laf.art
07-24-2009, 07:21 AM
I would leave it, it's a lovely delicate study just as it is

La_
07-24-2009, 02:39 PM
really lovely!

i don't know how you did that effect up in the top left ... a bit of that in the bottom left wouldn't hurt things i think but it's not necessary at all

very nice comp, very nicely handled, bravo!

la

p.s. the uploader doesn't like 'rn' together - as in morning

SandF
07-25-2009, 04:09 AM
The upper left was done using kosher salt while the paint was still damp. I am glad you liked it, thank you.