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timE
07-22-2009, 01:39 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-22-2009/45487_inglorious_congregation.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-22-2009/45487_P1000790.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/07-22-2009/45487_P1000789.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: the inglorious congregation
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 12x48
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
am wondering how good i am/what i have to work on... done over a period of a few months...

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
is this any good? what can i improve on?

laudesan
07-22-2009, 08:59 PM
Gosh Picasso....

Neat paintings, sorry I can't offer advice, just admire..

timE
07-22-2009, 10:10 PM
thanks... it is the same painting...the other two are close-ups....i'll take the admiration when i can get it which seems very rare these days....thanks

yarddog
07-22-2009, 11:06 PM
holy crow...what an imagination...!!
especially like the colorful stylized faces and the waky backgrounds....
for me...the full figures somehow seem to not belong with and therefore compete with the faces......
I hate to have to choosehttp://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/22-Jul-2009/182771-shakinghead.gif .............yd

timE
07-23-2009, 01:21 PM
thanks yarddog...I'll keep that in mind for the next one..

timE
07-23-2009, 01:23 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/23-Jul-2009/45487-P1000788.jpg here is the middle third close up...

La_
07-24-2009, 02:50 PM
:lol: WIld and CrAzy! I Love it :clap:

I can only imagine the multiple stories going through your head whilst creating it!

If i Had to pick i'd merely note - for my hanging and viewing purposes only - that, much as i love a little horror in my world, i'd prefer the scales to be tipped slightly on the up side vs down (happy/goofy vs sad/mad)

la

timE
07-25-2009, 02:36 PM
thanks la... i'll try to keep that in mind...on the grand scheme of things i don't know is there an abundance of mad/sad in this? i guess so... but i think it's portrayed in a friendly manner... although, this one seems to have taken a while to get many responses...i hope i am not alienating myself with this...

La_
07-25-2009, 06:52 PM
peak summer holiday time right now ... wouldn't worry about 'many responses'

= )