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Bongo1
07-19-2009, 10:25 PM
Thoughts, please! This is pastel on sanded paper, 18" x 28". Please be honest with your CC.

Thanks.

helenh
07-20-2009, 06:36 AM
I think your portrait is very well done, and I knew immediately who it was. I am distracted, however, by those streaks all over. They don't seem to serve any purpose.

joolee
07-20-2009, 07:15 AM
Certainly captured a good likeness - well done :thumbsup:
Jools

jackiesimmonds
07-20-2009, 08:13 AM
to be able to give constructive help I would like to see the reference

Looks to me as tho you have managed the eyes very well, I totally understand the anatomy and have been enjoying the steely gaze!

I have some concerns however about the colour under the apples of the cheeks, and what are those darkish lines either side, and below, the mouth? I do realise that they might be simple indentations casting shadows in the face caused by muscle activity but to my eye they look more like gashes in the skin...they bother me.

paulb
07-20-2009, 10:49 AM
I think it needs some more darks at the bottom to balance the darks at the top, less streaks as someone else pointed out, and a shadow under the necklace.

Beyond that good job, likeness very well captured.

DAK723
07-21-2009, 07:47 AM
A good likeness! A nice variety of soft and harder edges with the emphasis on the face. I like it!

Don

wal_t
07-23-2009, 04:11 PM
Good likeness and recognized immediately who it is. Maybe ease the background a little and make it more flat without the stripes. I would also do a little more modelling in the neck and shoulder area including the clothes. But hey, I am no expert :-) regards, Walter

mudfish
07-24-2009, 08:39 PM
A very good likeness, well done.

Aires
07-24-2009, 09:05 PM
Well done portrait when everybody instantly recognizes both the person and the expression on the face! Nice work.

PETE K
07-24-2009, 09:45 PM
very well done.

Bongo1
07-27-2009, 09:55 AM
Thanks everyone for your great comments. I've made some adjustments, particularly to the background and blazer. What do you think now?

DAK723
07-27-2009, 12:12 PM
I like the changes! Very nice!

Don

bnoonan
07-27-2009, 01:18 PM
There is no question have a likeness here! I'd make sure you don't let her neck get too "white" like a paste skin.

Notice how you changed her complexion color when you changed the background.... It really cooled her off all over!

Barb