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brosalia
05-18-2009, 12:36 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/05-18-2009/138627_100_1506.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: no name so far
Year Created:
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 18x24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
this was the first try using lights coming from both sides of the model--leftside and rightside of model---It was a important study in color-contrast,perspective,shadow.<br>

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
any and all information would be appreciated

StellaLenoir
05-18-2009, 12:39 PM
I love the body and its lights and shadows, and the background. Very nice form on the body, But it looks like you shrunk the head and the foward arm to fit the canvas? I would make them correct size and let them go off the canvas,

future
05-18-2009, 12:46 PM
i would enlarge the head to proportion and color coordinate it with the rest of the body;

whallart
05-18-2009, 01:46 PM
A bigger head or perhaps a smaller arm, nice shading!

dgford
05-22-2009, 07:22 AM
I don't mind the smaller head --- it really sends it up to the top. But the nearer arm does need enlarging. More important, in my opinion, would be to vary the intensity of the lighting so that one source is less powerful than the other --- not much, but discernible. The shadow needs to go right out to her right nipple.

Powerful and a great background. Let's have more from you.

Geoff

brosalia
05-28-2009, 01:56 PM
Thank you all for your input.I will put this oil on again with larger head--looking foward for your responce.