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totsy
05-16-2009, 06:20 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/05-16-2009/158729_068.JPG


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/05-16-2009/158729_Red_Shoe.jpg



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: 'Fiery Heels'
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 10X8
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Well, here's the renamed red shoe and socks again. This time it's Fiery Heels..I like this name!
Much thanks to the author of the name.


MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Is it better now?

See its inception below.

A big thank you to all who gave me directions and suggestions. I see a little correction is needed on the toe of the outer shoe. Anything else my mentors?

Totsy

Grunge
05-16-2009, 08:48 PM
This is very cute! I'm having a little trouble with the difference between the stipes of the stockings and the straps of the shoes. You might add some shadow there.

Corby
05-16-2009, 10:48 PM
Neat stuff totsy! I do see what Grunge is saying! I thought the white spots were decorative studs! I didn't even see that there were straps across the stockings! Yes define their edges and give them a glossy highlight like the shoes.

Hi Grunge! Good eye ya got there kid!

totsy
05-17-2009, 08:38 PM
Grunge, Corby

Yesss! Definitely.

Thanks.

Totsy