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Chia
05-14-2009, 12:12 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/05-14-2009/137335_Home_Again_1_sml.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Home Again (study)
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 18x14
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I posted this a while ago as a WIP. Finally spent a little more time on it & am ready to call it done. I think I sorted out most of the perspective issues that I was having problems with, but suspect that the door is still a bit wonky. This is a study of a segment of what will be a much larger painting.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Anything still glaringly obvious? Any feedback appreciated.

allanom
05-14-2009, 12:30 PM
The door still appears wonky because the molding is way off -- see my alt. Line that up and your door will be fine.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/14-May-2009/4031-Home_Again_1_sml.jpg

Barbie Bud
05-14-2009, 02:15 PM
Very nice work. I was about to point out the baseboard but I see allanom did that. Happy painting

Chia
05-14-2009, 09:27 PM
Thanks Allan & Barbie Bud. I completely missed that - and it's an easy fix!

Sam_I_Am
05-15-2009, 12:05 AM
Hey, Coralie :) This is really very much improved from your WIP posting. It looks great - fix the molding, and it'll be perfect :)

Chia
05-15-2009, 12:35 PM
Thanks for the encouragement Stef!
Here's the fix. Anything else that needs a tweak?
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/15-May-2009/137335-Red_Coat_sml.jpg

LynnDigby
05-15-2009, 04:27 PM
:clap:
Much improved!

Mikey
05-16-2009, 04:49 PM
I like the way you've handled the shadows, which make this painting.