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Thrash
05-11-2009, 03:04 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/05-11-2009/16703_waves.jpg



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Breaking Wave
Year Created: 2009
Medium: Pencil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 3 inches square
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Very small ink and pencil drawing.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Whatever input.

Spyderbabe
05-11-2009, 05:05 PM
You packed a lot into a little space. I'de ilike to see the horizon line leveled out - it dips low on the right. You might also consider bringing a broken path of those foreground light values back to waters edge.

Ladyred
05-11-2009, 10:53 PM
Nice little sketch. I like the clouds. I wish you could add some shading to the lines. They need a touch of depth, which I think the shading would do. Thanks for sharing and do keep drawing.

Sam_I_Am
05-11-2009, 10:57 PM
This is a nice little piece :) I agree with kathleen's comment re: the horizon line. Otherwise, I think I might like to see just a tidge more definition and contrast. It's almost hitting the mark on the squint test, but not quite, IMO.

Great Job :thumbsup:

AlliKat
05-12-2009, 01:14 AM
I wont add to the comments, I just wanted to say this is a great forerunner to a painted picture.