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MRSBB
05-09-2009, 06:40 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/05-09-2009/114956_100_2066_Touring_car.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/05-09-2009/114956_100_2075_Open_car.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Black and White
Year Created:
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Watercolor Paper
Dimension: 9 x 12
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Here are a couple more black and white cars to offer to my commission.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any feedback appreciated

halthepainter
05-09-2009, 06:54 PM
It's such beautiful work that I hate to bring anything up.

It looks as if you had problems with the tire on the right side of the bottom painting. The tire appears to be coming off the rim and out of round. Of course, perhaps that is the way it was?

billmahler
05-09-2009, 08:54 PM
Both are well done, Lenore, but I prefer the bottom one. More jaunty movement in it.
Corby's right about that wheel.. it's the only nit I can find to pick.

varna
05-09-2009, 09:11 PM
Such great drafting skill!!! I like them both (just the wheel issue) I have a preference for the second but both are excellent!!!

Ladyred
05-09-2009, 11:24 PM
Wonderful ! ! ! Put a little shine on the Top One.lol. Really nice. Thanks for sharing..

Sam_I_Am
05-10-2009, 03:07 AM
Excellent work :) nothing from me that hasn't already been mentioned :)

laudesan
05-10-2009, 04:38 AM
You sure are having fun with these old cars, and it shows. They both look great. Your client is going to have to choose all of them you know.. :-))

mooz49
05-10-2009, 04:43 AM
Wow!! .....beautiful work Lenore ..... I prefer the first one but both are wonderful .....:thumbsup:

MRSBB
05-10-2009, 02:16 PM
Thanks Hal for the input on the tire, my personal critic said it was also too small, so I worked on both issues. I'm afraid if I go further I will really mess it up. I'll post my rework.

Thanks Bill, I always look forward from your input.

Thanks Varna, but I am getting tired of black and white.

Ladyred I will try to shine er' up.

Thanks Stef, I appreciate the input.

Thanks JJ, now wouldn't that be good if he took them all.

Thanks Mooz. I'm with you as I like the 1st one better. It reminds me of the first car I ever drove. Some kid had his Dad's old car and he let me drive it, but I knew nothing about brakes, haha. Used the bank building to stop it, then got out and ran.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/10-May-2009/114956-100_2076_Open_car_2.jpg