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Osteomark
05-06-2009, 12:34 AM
Here's a 16x20" canvas.
Anything to improve? Should the stem shadow on the front of the bowl be crisper?
thanks,
Mark

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/05-May-2009/32048-cherrieswhitebowl1.jpg

gaykir
05-06-2009, 12:36 AM
Oh is this fabulous!

tbezesky
05-06-2009, 12:49 AM
I really like angle and composition! Well painted too.

Margaret 59
05-06-2009, 01:30 AM
Very, very nice

arl
05-06-2009, 10:06 AM
Wonderful colours and modeling.

LavenderFrost
05-06-2009, 12:12 PM
Very nice work!

lilbelle
05-06-2009, 02:06 PM
Wonderful job on the cherries and their reflections Mark!

nurciuoli
05-06-2009, 02:07 PM
What a wonderful painting!!

bchlvr
05-06-2009, 08:17 PM
Very nice!

Lady Carol
05-07-2009, 01:53 PM
It is usually appropriate to credit the contributor of the RIL image.

RPut
05-07-2009, 03:49 PM
Scrumptious!!

chammi kaiser
05-08-2009, 03:47 AM
Mark. I really like this one very much. Lovely glowing colours.

Charlie's Mum
05-08-2009, 06:12 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/RefLib/showphoto.php?photo=64447

Here's the ref image by madmum.

If you want it to look more like the ref Mark I think yes, the bowl needs to be much sharper on the bright side , crisper edge - and softer and darker on the shadow side with lost edges in places.
And although the shadow of the stalk is fairly sharp, it's not as sharp as you've painted it - the shadow on the painting looks like another stalk.

Otherwise, I like the warmer lighting you've given this piece- it's a nice painting! :D