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05-06-2009, 12:34 AM
Here's a 16x20" canvas.
Anything to improve? Should the stem shadow on the front of the bowl be crisper?
05-06-2009, 12:36 AM
Oh is this fabulous!
05-06-2009, 12:49 AM
I really like angle and composition! Well painted too.
05-06-2009, 01:30 AM
Very, very nice
Wonderful colours and modeling.
05-06-2009, 12:12 PM
Very nice work!
05-06-2009, 02:06 PM
Wonderful job on the cherries and their reflections Mark!
05-06-2009, 02:07 PM
What a wonderful painting!!
05-06-2009, 08:17 PM
05-07-2009, 01:53 PM
It is usually appropriate to credit the contributor of the RIL image.
05-08-2009, 03:47 AM
Mark. I really like this one very much. Lovely glowing colours.
05-08-2009, 06:12 PM
Here's the ref image by madmum.
If you want it to look more like the ref Mark I think yes, the bowl needs to be much sharper on the bright side , crisper edge - and softer and darker on the shadow side with lost edges in places.
And although the shadow of the stalk is fairly sharp, it's not as sharp as you've painted it - the shadow on the painting looks like another stalk.
Otherwise, I like the warmer lighting you've given this piece- it's a nice painting! :D
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