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Lulu
04-24-2009, 01:59 AM
36 x 24" gallery wrapped canvas.

Not sure I've finished yet, but posting for C&C
Many thanks to Graham for permission to use his ref pic.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/23-Apr-2009/1118-Flamenco_Fire_April_09Web.jpg

nithya_swamy
04-24-2009, 02:41 AM
Beautiful. Love the energy and movement, brilliant colors, and I LOVE how the dress almost merges with the background. Sign it :)

ecobb
04-24-2009, 03:09 AM
Very good..

arl
04-24-2009, 06:34 AM
Beautiful. I love the swirl of the dress.

Lulu
04-24-2009, 06:42 AM
thank you Nithya, Eric and Arlene.

Looking at it again here I notice that the lower res of the photo makes the face appear 'flatter' than irl.

Andun
04-24-2009, 07:20 AM
Woo hoo Lulu:) What a great painting!!!!!!!!!!

AndyMcC
04-24-2009, 08:48 AM
Very nice, the dress is great :)

tonyjazz
04-24-2009, 08:51 AM
Beautiful flow on the dress. You can feel the energy of the dance on this one. The area of the neck looks real tense.............TJ

anthony mauve
04-24-2009, 09:00 AM
Overall a good start though IMO it's too "dusty" looking--sharper focus may be in order. Two things that may need fixes: the index finger seems to be too long--I'd paint it out; and the muscles of the neck and the collarbone are much too pronounced and stick out--downplay them--they'll fit in much better.

anthony

v_techie
04-24-2009, 09:03 AM
Feels like you've captured the kick with her right leg where the knee is showing. Love the painting, well done!

purplepansey
04-24-2009, 09:13 AM
WoW! That is fire, great title for a beautiful red painting.

gaykir
04-24-2009, 09:29 AM
I think this is spectacular! I love the fluid lines of her gown. It just has so much beautiful movement and of course the color tells the story doesn't it?!!
Bravo!

laudesan
04-24-2009, 09:42 AM
Looking at it again here I notice that the lower res of the photo makes the face appear 'flatter' than irl.Right, I wont mention that then :-D

I absolutely love the movement in this painting, her dress is gorgeous, but then I am biased as I love red.. I can hear the music - feel the passion - this is a very successful painting!

OkeeKat
04-24-2009, 09:44 AM
Gorgeous!! Love the motion of the dress in this, great job!!

noodle1
04-24-2009, 10:02 AM
Really fantastic, you can hear the heels clicking on the floor, your flow in the dress well done and her hand, you nailed the whole movement..Great piece.

Elaine

LavenderFrost
04-24-2009, 11:05 AM
Wonderful flow and colour!

Ozone
04-24-2009, 11:15 AM
Hi Lulu,

I like your style, yes I do.

Oz:)

Linee
04-24-2009, 12:18 PM
Beautiful...like a flower in full motion.

Mz_Sketch_Pad
04-24-2009, 12:59 PM
Pretty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

phobden
04-24-2009, 01:39 PM
Top notch!

olliewood0702
04-24-2009, 03:59 PM
Lulu, another WONDERFUL dancer you've managed to capture here in this lovely painting!

Lulu
04-24-2009, 05:27 PM
Tony, Andy, Tony, Anthony, v techie, purple, JJ, Gayle, Kathie, Elaine, Michelle, Oz, Linda, Lori, Peter and Darla - Thank you all very much!

Anthony, the index finger has been bothering me too, I won't paint it out but I will make it a little shorter.

Lulu
04-24-2009, 06:36 PM
I shaved a millimetre or two off her index finger and took another photo in the morning light - the colours are truer in this one.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/24-Apr-2009/1118-Flamenco_Fire_Web_April_2609_wetc.JPG

rmc
04-24-2009, 08:45 PM
stunning movement in this Lulu-it has the energy of flamenco in it!!!!
congratulations!!!!
PS- I'd interpreted that she was holding a feather or such like in her hand rather then a protruding index finger

lilbelle
04-24-2009, 09:29 PM
Gorgeous Lulu! Wonderful motion, lovely features and I love the red!

Andun
04-25-2009, 07:25 AM
Excellent finish Lulu:) Very fluid movement!!!

Aires
04-25-2009, 01:04 PM
The mood of a lovely and passionate painting.:thumbsup:

eyepaint
04-25-2009, 01:52 PM
Love the passion! I vote for shaving another 1-3 mm off her finger ... and considering toning down the definition of her collarbone/neck marks ... but love the fabric!!!!

Lulu
04-25-2009, 05:00 PM
Thank you Ruth, Lillian, Aires, Anthony and EP.

Yes I just may have to get the scalpel out again:lol::lol:

I have been given permission to link to the ref. pic. You can see it here (here)

Ozone
04-25-2009, 05:28 PM
You were spot on Lulu, from the beginning. The ref proves your accuracy.

Put down the scalpel, calm down, you don't want to hurt anybody. Easy now, it's OK.

Oz:)

Lulu
04-25-2009, 11:06 PM
thanks Oz:) I think Ruth might have run off with the scalpels when she moved house but I'll check:D

I do appreciate everyone's comments and crits. I'll let it sit for a while and then reassess in a few days.

vensunn
04-25-2009, 11:14 PM
Lulu, this gal is beautiful!
The attitude,
The movement,
The color,
That one finger creating a sharp point among all the mass,
What a perfectly charming painting!
Steven

RPut
04-26-2009, 12:07 AM
I like this too! The red is gorgeous. My favorite is the peek of the top leg. I agree to soften the neck and collarbone, just a bit tho--you still want to see/feel the intense movement. Beautiful work!

laudesan
04-26-2009, 03:38 AM
Absolutely gorgeous, still!!!!!!!!

signed

your #1 fan!!! :-P

Lulu
04-26-2009, 07:47 AM
Thank you Steven, Ruthie and JJ! (((JJ:))

Well, I didn't leave it a few days, I shaved a tiny bit more of her index finger but I still left it slightly hyperflexed because that is common with dancers, and also softened the neck/collarbone musculature a little, yet still keeping the visible tension.

So, thank you all once again.........it is signed, finished, done...........and put away to be part of my Dance series exhibition next year!!!