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Aczarina
08-13-2002, 11:57 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-13-2002/11580_nicktrum.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Trumpeteer
Year Created: 2001
Medium: Photograph
Surface: Computer
Dimension: 5 x 8
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
all comments welcome

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
input on composition and color

futurebird
08-20-2002, 03:57 PM
Do you think you're the next jeff wall? Well you're not. Well not quite. I like the two birds in the back ground and the fact that he holds the trumpet like a gun in a way.

Remove the red call box on the fence, make all the leaves the same color, and give the boy more contrast (he's washed out)

When you are done with this how will you show it?

I just think it need to be more "planned"

If you are not a fan of jeff wall, look at his stuff for ideas.