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Cabal
08-13-2002, 06:29 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-13-2002/2995_Reanimation_Sphere.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: *Warning grotesque content* Sphere of Reanimation
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Mixed-Media
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 8 x 11
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is a collage I did a few years ago. It represent a murder victim left for dead in some barren landscape. A mysterious black sphere has evoked the victims remains reanimating them with the fuel of revenge. The sphere operates on the desires of lost souls.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
any comments would be appreciated.

drquinn
08-13-2002, 07:41 AM
The square human mouth on this sphere of reanimation helps add to the mystique.

futurebird
08-13-2002, 10:19 AM
the sphear seems like it is too far behind the body to ever meet up.

What about painting over the edges of the teeth to blend them in to the sphear more (they are a little on the clean and cute side for the rest of the image I think)

giniaad
08-13-2002, 10:32 AM
the only ssuggestion I would have

the teeth are ok
but the gums look plastic
like fake/ play/ halloween teeth inserts

this aspect contains too much humor
for such an image
and detract from the message/ feeling
you are wishing to convey

the rest all work well