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brazen7
08-12-2002, 06:45 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-12-2002/9735_pondering.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Pondering
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 22x30
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Please ignore the difference in arm size, was painting this as the person was shedding herself

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I have a question on the shadows....I no longer have the model and was wondering if shadow is needed around the hand.....

futurebird
08-13-2002, 04:28 AM
The body is very full --at first I thought it was a photo of clay relief.

I think it might work better if the shoulders came up to the top of the frame:

jnet11
08-13-2002, 11:34 AM
where is her poor head? I miss it. I need it. I don't mind the other distortions, though, such as the arm you mentioned.

I think future's crop is a good one, if you insist on there being no head.