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brazen7
08-12-2002, 06:28 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-12-2002/9735_woman_shedding_self.JPG

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-12-2002/9735_woman_shedding_self_3.JPG

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-12-2002/9735_woman_shedding_self_4.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Re-birth
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Sculpture
Surface: Clay
Dimension: 29x12x15
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This piece was made to explain my mothers menopause

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I was wondering if the oxides used to enhance the strain of the muscles are the properly placed

giniaad
08-12-2002, 10:40 PM
it is kind of hard to see not in person
but the concept is very interesting
and it looks like you carried it off well

blkros
08-12-2002, 11:35 PM
Nice work. Wish the pics weren't so blurry.

futurebird
08-13-2002, 12:46 AM
I think you should paint it. Since the bodies have no faces I have trouble reading it and overall it's not a bold enough form (to complex and all on one level) to just be an abstract. (think 'bird in flight')

But if you paint it you could bring out the forms of the two bodies better.

-S

Danny
08-14-2002, 02:44 AM
I don't think I would paint it. Glaze in flesh tone with a touch of red mabe representing hot flashes, but sculptures like this are meant to be free form. Good job!