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Nathan Reed
08-11-2002, 03:21 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-11-2002/2361_brittanysanta2.JPG

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-11-2002/2361_britsantaphoto.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Revision of Brittany
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Pastel
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 11
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Here's another look at Brittany after a little bit of revision work.

I couldn't fix the eyes much like Ginia rightfully suggested, because I layed them out wrong in the original draught.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Critiques appreciated

Ceu
08-11-2002, 11:25 PM
she is beuatiful, you did a great job:)

giniaad
08-12-2002, 12:31 PM
the only nit pic
I can see...
studying the photo reference
is that her forehead is a bit taller in reality

you still captured her lovely spirit
and I love the way you captured it
perspective, colors, composition,
with your textured magic touch
all working beautifully

futurebird
08-12-2002, 01:56 PM
I think she looks much younger in this one.

:)