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02-01-2009, 06:59 PM
I am not sure if that large blue patch works with the rest of the peice. C and C welcome. This is overall a lighter palette than I am used to.
02-01-2009, 07:09 PM
I have decided I like it a lot better this way. It is like a city scape. Anyhoo, enjoy. C and C welcome.
02-02-2009, 08:49 AM
Yes, I agree. Presented in landscape mode this is much stronger...good movement. Interesting what a difference it can make, isn't it?!
02-03-2009, 10:03 PM
The large blue space works. I would enhance one of the yellow area as balance, maybe. Either way it it looks cool.
02-03-2009, 10:51 PM
Three wolves---- it is nice i like the soft values the only thing i can think of is if you don't like the darker blue patch try to put the same color as and ascent some where else to help balance it.
Sean walker williams
ps i will post some of my work as well it is abstract
02-04-2009, 01:06 PM
this is an abstract group apart of http://www.fineartametica.com
sean walker williams
02-04-2009, 09:13 PM
This piece does seem to feel better as a horizontal. I think the darker blue sort of "grounds" the composition in a good way by bringing one's eye back from all the things pointing to the upper left ( viewed horizontally). If this were mine, I would probably exagerate that darker blue in some of those other areas where it can now be found and maybe add some sort of line to stop all of those shapes pointing north -west. Please forgive me for going on-and-on here. Obviously, I am enjoying studying this piece or I would not have spent this much time to critique!! Keep up the good work!
02-04-2009, 11:44 PM
I like the horizontal view too, and I think
you've gotten some good suggestions from the group,
just don't over-do,,,,,I don't think it needs but a tad balance.
I'm feeling sailboats in a gale.
02-05-2009, 07:18 PM
I agree, the more I look at it the more it works on the horizontal view. The blue grounds the piece when seen that way.
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