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Anonymous
08-10-2002, 08:38 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-10-2002/11505_try.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: i tries
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Mixed-Media
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 5
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This was done with gauche, ink, designer's markers, gel pens and pencil on pink staionary.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Feel like the window is to empty.

What do you think she is trying to do?

jerryW
08-10-2002, 11:23 PM
wonder what future bird will think of this?

futurebird
08-10-2002, 11:52 PM
I dig it. Reminds me of my favorite artist.

jerryW
08-11-2002, 10:21 AM
priorities are important

giniaad
08-11-2002, 01:40 PM
I'm not quite sure what to think of this

but, overall, I like this
exaggerated, colorful cartoon figure

what do I see in the sky,
through the window?

aspects conflicting
(title confirms)
"white" hand/ "black" face...?
struggle
but about what...?
not simply ballet

composition leans to the right
like the color contrast
between outfit and wall

futurebird
08-11-2002, 01:51 PM
okay it was me... I hit the check box to see what happend...

Um I was trying to have her in whit tights, but I guess it looks too much like skin, maybe if they were torn??

jerry: priorities are important? I don't understand?

thanks for responding!

jerryW
08-11-2002, 03:42 PM
I was just saying anything that might be construed that I still thought it was you who posted this - but one feels so silly when wrong.
priorities related to your favourite artist - yourself!
a big eogoist, takes one to know one.

Jangogh
08-11-2002, 05:33 PM
I could see torn tights. Or how about net stocking tights? Her struggle is her arms are too short to straighten her leg. A physical limitation. Mine would be, hmmm, well, just getting into tights! In real life, neither are correctable :-)

futurebird
08-12-2002, 01:54 PM
I'll need to start over to make the rip the way I want it. Well, maybe I'll make some other changes too.