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KTusa
12-23-2008, 12:57 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-23-2008/140115_glass_jar-eggs-by__ktuinart-acrylic-canvas-4,5x4.5inch-dec-forum.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-23-2008/140115_glass_jar-out_side_egg-by__ktuinart-acrylic-canvas-4,5x4.5inch-dec-forum.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Chicken stuff
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 4.5x4.5inch
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Is this what you meant Corby by darker values? The glass is now better noticeable!

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
All heavy comments are welcome, Thanks!

Corby
12-23-2008, 03:24 PM
Hi KT! as usual I like what you are doing. I cannot but barely comprehend an egg that is faceted! But you have displayed it well and it is still definitely an egg! Bravo! There is nothing wrong with your depiction of glass in either painting. I am looking at the presentation of the glass from perhaps a more traditional viewpoint. It is sort of that you paint everything but the glass in such a manner that at the last it calls for just a few brush strokes to bring the glass into existence. It has a different more subtle effect and yet the glass is definitely in the picture so to speak: Here are a couple alterations of what I mean about how it looks. Words just do not always convey the point like an image may. In fact it may be that I am trying to compare two totally unrelated approaches here.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/23-Dec-2008/70790-greenapples.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/23-Dec-2008/70790-eggs.jpg

KTusa
12-24-2008, 12:27 PM
Thanks Corby, for you critiques!:) I understand what you meant now and will trying it in the new series. Only traditional painter work is boring and to simple, I try a style to paint that is miles far indicates who has made it!

So I have de same piece painted in a other background, but is not my favorite.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/24-Dec-2008/140115-glass_jar-out_side_egg-by__ktuinart-02dubbel-acrylic-canvas-4,5x4.5inch-dec-forum.jpg

Happy Christmas days,
Karel