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Ceu
08-06-2002, 12:48 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-05-2002/3640_tourists.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-05-2002/3640_tourists2.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: tourists
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 12x16
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Ok this is a series that i'm doing . the first one is Untamed wates, I have all this pictures that i really love from portugal beaches from there.
So I will be painting different views of that for awhile.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
your thoughts that is all I ask?

futurebird
08-06-2002, 02:07 AM
because they have on shades they can't see anything. They take photos but never reay look at anything.

I like how because they are "looking" at me I feel like a local.

I like the knees, in the 2nd one, why do people dress so badly when they are in a new place?

artinoils
08-06-2002, 02:43 AM
I like this...it made me smile.:D The universal tourist!

Pam B.
08-06-2002, 04:24 AM
Something a little scary here........maybe all those sunglasses in a dark space.

Great interpretation and style. Wonder about that blue in the background, it seems a little overpowering.

pracht
08-06-2002, 10:02 AM
This depicts a profound mood that I enjoy. Id work on the young girl in the lower center. Either turn her head to partially facing, or add dimension to the hair. The colors and lines are wonderful.

Ceu
08-10-2002, 12:48 AM
thank you for all yours responses.
here is my reference image and the final image

Ceu
08-10-2002, 12:50 AM
final image. your thoughts

Jangogh
08-10-2002, 03:06 AM
I like the changes you made to the people in the final image. They are individuals now.

Think I would crop the image up to the bottom of the little girls shorts and halfway into the gray area on the right.