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ArizonArtist
08-05-2002, 07:30 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-05-2002/11345_resting_in_the_rain.JPG

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-05-2002/11345_detailofmanwbucket.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-05-2002/11345_Image100.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Resting in the rain
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 18x24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
this painting has been worked and reworked.*sigh*
I'm still just not sure about it.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
just like to know what you think..any comments would be appreciated.

giniaad
08-05-2002, 09:57 PM
hmmm...cowboys with yellow rain coats
beam me up scottie...only kidding...

I can see from the close-ups
you have some pretty nifty stuff going on here
(especially for a relatively small canvas)
nice details!

what does not fit is the lighting of the stream
it does not fit
with the rest of the lighting in the area
(and maybe looks to full right to the edges of it
like it is that narrow and very deep too?)

by the looks of the land
it is being lit by more than the fire
so it must be from the sky
which could have some lighter areas

maybe the yellow coats could be muted more
especially in their shadows...

I love that horse in the front...
great perspective and rendering
you have a nice scene here...

deevaa
08-05-2002, 10:48 PM
what she said!!

I have nothing to add to what giniaad suggested, she covered the whole scene.