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KTusa
12-03-2008, 06:49 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/12-03-2008/140115_glass-apple-jar-by__ktuinart-acrylic-canvas-4,5x6,0inch-dec-forum.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: The glass line
Year Created:
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 6.0x4.5inch
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is also a experimental pieces like the glass jars. Only I want to try something deferrent like normally so you can see more lines.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
All comments are welcome, especially lines and colors. More lines or is it too much, Thanks!

Corby
12-03-2008, 07:30 PM
I like this, it has a feeling of completeness even though it is an exploration. I am wondering if by 'lines' you might mean 'planes' or 'facets' having more to do with the direction of surfaces? These convey that interest very forcefully.

KTusa
12-03-2008, 08:46 PM
Yes Corby I mean facets of brushstrokes (lines) but, I think it is not good enough.

tgsloth
12-03-2008, 10:46 PM
If I compare it to previous lemon depictions, I feel like it's too spare, too deconstructed but it's certainly more original and others may rate it more highly.

thomas w
12-04-2008, 07:52 AM
I prefer your more rounded work. This seems much to angular and sterile. But it is still an exceptional painting.
Thomas W