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minihorse
11-30-2008, 04:24 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/11-30-2008/56200_ben___lucas_framed_2.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Ben and Lucas
Year Created:
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 18x22
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is a commision piece from my reference photo. I have posted this as a step by step wip in watercolor workshop...everybody there is so kind!

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Anything I should do differently in the next portrait piece?

minihorse
11-30-2008, 04:55 PM
oops, this was supposed to go to structured critiques....can somebody please move it?

Ronni
11-30-2008, 05:53 PM
Good it is here:) they are very cute!

ArtSuperhero
11-30-2008, 08:59 PM
Very nice work. I think the customer should be very happy! I'm not a huge watercolor fan when it is painted thinly, but this is very saturated with color.
The only thing I can add art wise is the older boys foot is kind of distracting to the eye. I'm sure it looked that way in the photo, but it is at an awkward angle and doesn't read as a foot right away. I may have deviated from the photo here. Not a big deal. Great painting.