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nicoletta
08-02-2002, 12:42 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-01-2002/6740_ballerinas.JPG

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-01-2002/6740_big_pear_little_zinnia.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/08-01-2002/6740_august_gold.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: ballerinas, big pear, august gold
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 24 x 30
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
these are MAXIE'S paintings
she is haveing a hard time getting them in herself
please engourage her to try more lol

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
any comments appreciated on color,composition, form etc appreciated

JodiPrice
08-02-2002, 12:55 AM
Maxie!!! Your paintings are INCREDIBLE!!!! The colors are gorgeous, the subjects are gorgeous, everything is just gorgeous!!!!

What a TALENT!!!! I am soooo jealous!!!

Keep up the fantastic work!!!

:)

Andrew
08-02-2002, 11:25 AM
Such skill should be developed further.

The still lifes are fab, especially the pears! That one has so much volume and life.

The ballarinas have a perspective problem. I am not sure what it is, but they seem almost pasted on to me. It isn't nearly as cohesive as the two still lifes.

Andrew

jerryW
08-02-2002, 02:33 PM
the pears would be enough for me

YLCIA
08-02-2002, 03:38 PM
The pears and august gold are absolutely superb. I just want to reach and touch them!

The ballerinas have their legs and arms too slim and too short for their torsos in my personal opinion

Thank You for sharing.

Looking forward to seeing more of Maxie's work!

Julia

artinoils
08-02-2002, 05:17 PM
Agree, the pears have it:clap: Beautifully done!
The other still life I think would be better with the grapes painted more as a mass rather than each grape defined.
Ballerinas has nice parts but they look like the floor is tilting down, enhanced by the front left looking like she 's climbing up.

Pam B.
08-02-2002, 09:02 PM
Maxie your still life's are just lovely! I like the pears best too. Your pears look biteable!!!!!!

The ballerina's is a nice piece, but the thing that bothers me is they all look a little frozen in time, the life has gone out of them.
I agree the floor is tilting too.

Nevertheless gorgeous!!! :clap: